请帮我修改英文作文,最好帮我重新写结尾
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总的来说没有太多错误 只是句子都比简单 个别词语用得不准确

改动1：Someone said to become rich, someone said to find a good job.-----Someone want to become rich, someone want to find a good job.

改动2：To get to this goal-----To reach this goal

结尾：The above mentioned are my educational goals.Whenever I think of the goals,I cannot but feel energetic.As a high school student,the only thing I can do to reach those goals it to study hard.I will try my best to realise them

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