短文改错Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to hav
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Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spending（改成spend,have to "do" sth) at least three to four hours doing my homework at home.（为了句式平衡,可以把at school 移到lessons后面,但是这个可以忽略,不算明显错误.）Our(改成We,我们学生,不是我们的学生） students are eager to play and（可以加to） enjoy ourselves,but most of us hardly have any time to do that we want to（这里to不能省掉,因为前面的to do中的to与这个在句子中效果不一样）.Therefore（前面没有说明什么原因吧?所以从even看来,这里应该表示递进,可以用what's more）,we even don't have enough sleep.I don't exact（exactly,动词前面应该是副词） know why we have to have such a heavy load.It（改成There,是“there is"的句式）seems to be three causes about（介词错了,cause一般不和about搭配,应该用of 或者for） the overload,the pressure of examinations,too much homework or（改成and) the high expectations from （本人觉得这里应该加上一个the,因为上文没提到parents,这里突然表示泛指,加个定冠词好些）parents.We are often warned if we don't do our best we won't have the chance to go to the university.

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