Humorous stories are popular among junior students,while sen
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问题:这句话不符合英语句子中的平行结构.while是连词,连接的两个句子必须形式上一致,意思上表示对比.

这句话里while前主语是humorous,宾语是junior students;while后主语是senior students,宾语是pop novels.所以结构上不对称.

应该改为:

1.Humorous stories are popular among junior students,while popular novels are preferred by senior students.

OR 2.Junior students like humorous stories,while senior students perfer reading popular novels.