One afternoon on April 1912,a new ship set off from England toAmaerica on it first trip.-----Amaerica改为America
It was one of the largest and finest ship ai that time.-----ai改为at
It was cold,but the ship was pleasant and people are enjoying thenselves.----are改为were
The next day was even cold.----cold改为colder
People could see icebergs here or there .--or改为and
At night,suddenly the man on watch shouting,“Look out!Iceberg!Iceberg!”--- shouting改为shouted
It was too late .A ship hit the iceberg and came to a stop .---A ship 改为The ship
There that was a very big hole in the ship and water began to come.----that去掉
Slowly the ship started to go down.