I was so exited to be there exited改为excited
When I lived in City of Vancouver city前面加the,表特指
many difference difference加s表复数
and the environment is cleaner than China.最好是 the environment is cleaner than that in China
I don’t it is a good habit.ti前加上think
It’s a good way to have the transport facilities,
I had activity club,i have joined a club
but now I don’t be terrified of speaking in front of other people.,可以简短一点,不要前后重复.可以改为,but now i donot think so
I felt I was more confident ,是现在感觉吗,那就用现在时态