谁帮我修改一下这篇英语作文,可以删改.急啊!
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I was so exited to be there exited改为excited

When I lived in City of Vancouver city前面加the,表特指

many difference difference加s表复数

and the environment is cleaner than China.最好是 the environment is cleaner than that in China

I don’t it is a good habit.ti前加上think

It’s a good way to have the transport facilities,

I had activity club,i have joined a club

but now I don’t be terrified of speaking in front of other people.,可以简短一点,不要前后重复.可以改为,but now i donot think so

I felt I was more confident ,是现在感觉吗,那就用现在时态