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I liked travelling because it could make me happy and I could learn lots of things from

many places in the world.I went to travel with my mum when I was six.From then on,

I would go to a place that I haven’t been on each summer holiday.Furthermore,I had been to

many places in the world like America,Thailand,Malaysia,and so on.In China,I had been to Beijing,Hong Kong,Sit sang,ect.Oh,so many!I gave a profundity impression of America and Sit sang.I went to America with my class for 13 days.That was very interesting I thought.We had been to San Francisco,Los Angel,New York and Washington D.C..I thought L.A.was the most

interesting place because there has Disney and Hollywood and it’s much bigger than

the one in Hong Kong!Also,Sit sang made me surprise:it was the most beautiful place that I had seen.If I had a chance,I would show the photos of Sit sang to you!

I enjoyed travelling.That’s why the title of this article is “Travel in my life”!

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