This news mainly talks about taxi driver in New York recently uplifted the price madly.Now the New York Taxi Commission has launched an investigation of this incident.When I saw this news,it shocked me.It showed me the greed of the humans.It is the same in China.Almost every year when the big festivals arrive,the traffic companies will raise their ticket fares.
The desires of heart is indeed endless.Not only the Americans but also the Chinese sometimes are greedy.There are many inequities in China,consumers are often deceived by the greedy sellers in the market.All Chinese people want to make a lot of money and become rich.
As the gap between the rich and the poor continues to expand,this situation turns even worse.In some shopping malls,if there are someone who unlike native,the owner of shop will sell products at a high price.If foreigners come to China to shop and they do not bargain,shop assistants will sell things at three times the original prices.But if they are knowledgeable people,they will not be cheated.
最后一段的第二句话,unlike native不知道你在说什么.没有改.
另外一个问题是你的逻辑,我把原来你的第一第二段重新整理了一下.但现在整篇还是不够有逻辑,你每一段要写什么,前后有没有罗嗦重复颠来倒去,这都是要考虑的.
你这篇类似于小论文了.那么就要观点、现象、结论明明确确的.
