以上翻译均非商务英语要求:
dear 收信人
我已付款
I've made the payment.
一切都顺利吗?(和上一句不太沾边,中文也需要润色下)
How is business going on?I wish the best for you!
如果有问题请回复我.
Please feel free to let me know if i am needed.
发货时间是否是下周1
As for the shipping date,could you confirm it be next Monday?
Thank you very much.
best regards
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