(Good evening,ladies and gentlemen.) My name is Shawn.I’m a nine-year-old boy.I was very lucky to participate in this contest and won the third place in the last year.At that time I told myself that I would come back again and do the better.And now,just as you see,I’m here,this time I will recite the New Concept english book 3.no matter I fail or not ,I will try my best.During last year,I have read a large numbers of interesting English books ,such as the last of the Mohicans,the tragedy of Dr Faustus,Robin Hood,Hamlet,Robinson Crusoe and so on.These made me be crazy about English.And I have the interesting in the program of computer.I love programming Turbo Pascal,Flash and Delphie7.My dream is to be a computer programmer like Bill Gates.This is me,a lovely and smart boy.Thank you!
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