初一英语作文求纠错My winter holidayI was very happy during the winter
3个回答

加了括号说明的都是要改的：

My winter holiday

I was very happy during the winter holiday.The Spring Festival is on January 31st.My parents and I (这里不能加were) visited my grandparents.I was very exciting.I ate family reunion dinner with my grandparents.After dinner,we watched TV on the sofa.We watched TV until 12 o’clock.

I went to the（go to the cinema固定搭配） cinema on February 5th.We watched a film named Frozen.It was very interesting.We went hiking on February 10th.It was snow（snowy应该应形容词）.I like（这里可以用一般现在时,我一直都喜欢雪,难道我曾经喜欢雪,现在不喜欢了吗?那真是这样的话你也可以用liked） snow.It is cold but beautiful.

相关问题