英语高手们帮我看一下这一段英文有没有错误呀!
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AS I WILL 应该改为IT FOLLOWS MY WAY

USE IT FOR GOOD 改为 USE IT WELL

WHAT I DO 改为 WHAT I WILL DO

THIS DAY WILL BE GONE 改为 THIS DAY WILL LEAVE ME AWAY

LEAVING IN TIS PLACE SOMETHING THAT I HAVE TREDED 改为 LEAVE ME THE HARVEST OF IT

NOT LOSE 改为 DON'T LOSE

REGRET THE PRICE 改为 REGRET FOR THE PRICE

这些只是一些语法错误 至于语言习惯错误 搭配错误 就不挑了

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