一篇概括课文的 短文,明天要交了,麻烦高手纠错(把语法之类的错误改正确).纠得越多我奖励越多.
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只改语法哈~

was received...received

from this woman后面的逗号改成句号

with the time went by.with time going by

believe + that

the soldier + came back from

made...making

though...think

pass...passed

text...test

fell...felt

to..for

no matter前的破折号很奇怪,thankful也很奇怪..

structure part

meet...met

write...describe

reader...readers或者the reader

tell us how did this couple fallen in love...tells us how this couple fell in love

meet...met

He pass the text .And the soldier saw the truth...He passed the test and saw the truth.

see有这个用法,不过看起来有点儿怪..