BEC改错题 求助Vestment Analysts wantedA Fund Management and subsi

BEC改错题 求助

Vestment Analysts wanted

A Fund Management and subsidiary of a prestigious Investment Bank

00. seeks bright young Investment Analysts to augment its rapidly expanding research

41. department, Our client is a top US institution with significant funds under

42. management from world-wide. Increasingly it is seeking to manage the European

43. component of its portfolio from London. This has been led to an impressive rise in

44. its profile in European markets. The Bank is looking for talented and ambitious

45. its profile in European markets. The Bank is looking for talented and ambitious

46. who performs rigorous and detailed investigation into companies and securities

47. before making recommendations to those Fund Managers. Ideally, you will have

48. excellent academic credentials and a solid professional with grounding in

49. analytical techniques. Particularly useful would be training in an accountancy,

50. an MBA or a legal qualification Excellent communication in sills are required. For an

initial, confidential conversation contact the Bank’s Personnel Manager directly

我不知道46题应该怎么,请问哪位大侠知道啊?

谢谢啦~

不知怎么改....

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应该在who前面加一个one 或者把who改为whoever

为了能够引导后面的定语从句

希望能够帮助楼主

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