学霸们进来帮忙找找错误或提一些意见啊!
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使用了简单的从句;文中用词稍显贫乏,另外请注意单词拼写的检查;文中很少出现过渡词和衔接词;请注意分段.

Because I think it is (broing )===boring

And she( study) very well===三单==studies

But (she )study ===her

is not very( well)===be后用形容词===good

同样的句型和词语用太多了,可适当转换