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It was the first day of our summer holiday.All of us were very happy.Why?Because we have one months to do things .We are free.Although we have some homework.But we can finish them in several days.And we can make good use ofthe rest time .My god!We were very tired after hard studying.In winter holidays,I want to have full good food at Last ,I will have a good rest.
It was the second day of our summer holiday.I felt good.I felt I am free.I had a lot of time to do things .My parents are in xx.So I live alone but I don’t feel lonely.But I didn’t do something special.I stayed at home and watched TV.Oh!I wrote an composition.It was my homework.Today,I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired.It was time for dinner.I must go!I am very hungry.
I am planning to spend my summer holiday on sports this year.Playing basketball is always my favourite,so some of my classmates and I will form a small team and play basketball together.Sometimes we may have a match against some other teams and I enjoy the sense and we win the game.
Today I found time was a cruel thing.Whatever man is,time always goes on.It won’t stay to wait for somebody.You can’t use anything to exchange time.Time is also a fair thing.Although you have a lot of money or you enjoy high reputation,time won’t leave them more.Today I found I hadn’t enough time.Although I have more than a-month holiday,but I found I had a lot of things to do.I had a lot of homework to do and I am essential to complete the homework as soon as I have time
