各位大虾帮我一篇英语短文,感激不尽~
2个回答

Last Saturday ,I read books in the library all the morning long.However,when I walked out of the library,my bike was gone,so I had to walk home.

Yesterday,I went to buy a new bike,but there were so many styles that I did't know which one to buy.The shopkeeper told me Jinshin bikes ,which were made in Wuxi,were good and the price was low.The I chose a white one and thanked the shopkeeper.

我这篇是不是好很多呢?上面的有很多时态用错了,I'm right,he is wrong.