Chinese cultures of one hundred years,please look at Shanghai,one thousand years,please look at Beijin,three thousand years,please look at Shaanxi,five thousand years,please look at Shanxi.
PS.楼主你那个写法大部分都可以,不过有的语句表达的侧重点就变了.不过这段话的语境和用途你比我们都清楚,所以相信你这么写应该是不错的.
另外有个错误,一开始,date back to,是专指回到某年代,回到某一时候,而不是说回顾历史等.
稍微改一下就比较成功了.自己写是对的,每写一次都是一种提高.