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This autumn my class went to Dalian to go the camping.We arrived at a sandy beach

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with a well view of the sea.We set up our tents on the sandy beach,and when night

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fell we made a fire to give us light and kept us warm.All the classmates sat around

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them ,talking and laughing.Several hours late ,Li Mei and I went back to the tent to

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have a chat.We stayed up all of night.We found that we two had a lot of common.For

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instance,we both like the same singers and have great enthusiasm for physics.The fire and

the stars see our happiness. What I wished time would stop at that moment!

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