希望好心人帮我看一下这篇英语短文的错误
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这全是机器翻译的吧. 下面是我自己改的,Today, my topic is my hero. My hero is Hocking. As the saying goes, people should find a hero who can make up for his own shortcomings. And the direction to move forward is clear and firm.
My self-control is bad. I always cannot resist the temptation, and give up learning. But Hocking has better self-control. Although he is disabled, he did not give up himself and worked hard. At last ,he become a famous scientist. In university, illness never stoped him. He still persevered in his research. He finally became a giant. 就改这些了,下面的你自己改改吧.
