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My dad is a typical case OF how education could change one’s life. He was born into a very poor family in a small village far away from the city. He has other 7 brothers and sisters and he’s the eldest brother who had to take care of his younger brothers and sisters when his parents were out on the farms.
By that time, the whole country was very poor and of course my grandpa and grandma were not able to afford every kid for school. Among all the eight kids, my dad did the best in primary school so that he got a chance to continue with his education. He always topped in school tests and finally got into one of the best COLLEGES in the state and moved out of the small village to the big city. He was the first college student of the whole village.
By that time, there were not many people who went to college, and my dad was one of them. So no matter where he worked, he got promoted much more easily and quickly than the others who hadn't got an chance to go to college. Eventually, he became a chief executive of a middle size state owned company. Nowadays, you may need a PhD degree to get promoted SO easily.
