In the summer holiday,(这里用逗号) I made a wrong decision that made me really regret(这里用形容词regretful).It was a cloudy day,and it maybe rained (过去将来时,用it would rain at any time)at any time.But I should took(take,情态动词后用原型) part in a basketball lesson.I must arrived(arrive同上一错误) at the gym before the climate has changed(before引导的时间状语从句.这里改为changed更好,一般时态).The world always changes too quick.Sometimes the world is unfair.I fell down the stairs on the way to the basement.Suddenly,There was a horrible ache on(in) my right leg and my left hand.It was pretty serious!So I lay on the ground and couldn’t move.Fifteen minutes later.I chose to go to the lesson even I was too difficult to move.除了这些,句子的衔接最好改下,记住,两个主句连在一起要用连词(and,yet,but,so等等),中间加逗号.主句和从句连在一起,用的是从属连词,比如说(when,where等等)
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