挑一下英语语法错误,请指教.Ladies and gentlemen.I'm * *.I was quite an ou
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注意：我把错误直接更正I was quite an outgoing girl 应给为i am 不是陈述过去,不能用过去式. high school应该为a high school.一个学校前面必须有冠词.而且不强调这个学校,只说我在一个高中.所以就用a, 泛指一个高中,没有特指这个学校. have a special pursuit of beautiful 应该为i have a pursuit of beauty,all the high school girls 应该为all the other high school girls 和其他所有高中的女孩子一样 But actually, my hair is still very messy.更改为well actually my hair is often very messy.afraid 前加and 变成and afraid of .which are not very troublesome 改成 that is not very troublesome.those 不可数名词不能用are.

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