请帮我检查语法错误,Which would you - 已解决

请帮我检查语法错误,Which would you give up :TV ,cell ,Web We are livi

请帮我检查语法错误,

Which would you give up :TV ,cell ,Web

We are living in an information age TV ,cells and the are widely used novo Most of us even hardly enjoy their life without them.

But ,if I was asked to give up one of them ,I would give up the TV .I think TV shows are not so important in my life .There are too many commercials .The ads is a waste of time and I can Leary ,news from other way just like read them from the websites .

Cells and the web more necessary to me that TV .I need my cellphone to keep in touch with my family and friends ,The Inter net can help me know almost everything I need

收藏：

点赞数：

评论数：

3个回答

更改的用“[]”括起

Which would you give up :TV ,cell ,[or the internet]?

We are living in an information age.TV ,cellphones and the [internet] are widely used.[Some] of us even hardly enjoy their life without them.

[However] ,if I was asked to give up one of them ,I would give up [无] TV .I think TV shows are not so important [to] my life .There are too many commercials .[无][Watching] advertisement is [无] waste of [my] time and I can Leary 你是指learn?] news from other way[s] [such as] [无] websites .

Cellphones and the [internet is] more necessary to me [than] TV .I need my cellphone to keep in touch with my family and friends .The Internet can help me know almost everything I need[这句实在别扭,With the internet I can learn almost everything I want to know about.]

建议不要使用缩写.聊天可以,写文章最好不要这样.

点赞数：

评论数：

相关问题

以“Which would you give up:TV,cell,or Web?”为题的英语作文

点赞数：
0
回答数：
1
以which would you give up:tv,cell or web?为题,写一篇100字的英文.

点赞数：
0
回答数：
1
题为“Which would you give up TV,call or web?”的英语作文?

点赞数：
0
回答数：
1
请问Which one would you like?和Would you like which one?哪个有语法错误

点赞数：
0
回答数：
1
英语好的进帮我检查两句话1 I won't give up until you give up2 Though god

点赞数：
0
回答数：
5
Which would you most like ____,a phone,a TV , or a car?

点赞数：
0
回答数：
5
what would life be like if you give up using you

点赞数：
0
回答数：
2
___we give him something to eat,he would save up for his lit

点赞数：
0
回答数：
3
although it is far away from my dream,I would not give up,帮我

点赞数：
0
回答数：
1
We trust you ; only you can him to give up smoking

点赞数：
0
回答数：
1

关注公众号

一起学习，一起涨知识