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Which would you give up :TV ,cell ,[or the internet]?
We are living in an information age.TV ,cellphones and the [internet] are widely used.[Some] of us even hardly enjoy their life without them.
[However] ,if I was asked to give up one of them ,I would give up [无] TV .I think TV shows are not so important [to] my life .There are too many commercials .[无][Watching] advertisement is [无] waste of [my] time and I can Leary 你是指learn?] news from other way[s] [such as] [无] websites .
Cellphones and the [internet is] more necessary to me [than] TV .I need my cellphone to keep in touch with my family and friends .The Internet can help me know almost everything I need[这句实在别扭,With the internet I can learn almost everything I want to know about.]
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