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Which would you give up :TV ,cell ,Web
We are living in an information age TV ,cells and the are widely used novo Most of us even hardly enjoy their life without them.
But ,if I was asked to give up one of them ,I would give up the TV .I think TV shows are not so important in my life .There are too many commercials .The ads is a waste of time and I can Leary ,news from other way just like read them from the websites .
Cells and the web more necessary to me that TV .I need my cellphone to keep in touch with my family and friends ,The Inter net can help me know almost everything I need
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Which would you give up :TV ,cell ,[or the internet]?
We are living in an information age.TV ,cellphones and the [internet] are widely used.[Some] of us even hardly enjoy their life without them.
[However] ,if I was asked to give up one of them ,I would give up [无] TV .I think TV shows are not so important [to] my life .There are too many commercials .[无][Watching] advertisement is [无] waste of [my] time and I can Leary 你是指learn?] news from other way[s] [such as] [无] websites .
Cellphones and the [internet is] more necessary to me [than] TV .I need my cellphone to keep in touch with my family and friends .The Internet can help me know almost everything I need[这句实在别扭,With the internet I can learn almost everything I want to know about.]
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