我觉得你的基本结构已经在了,如果要为演讲增添一些色彩的话我建议你在演讲稿里用一些名人名言,然后确保段与段之间的衔接是流畅的,不会突兀,多用一些疑问句来串起整个演讲稿.但是演讲最重要的还是你的表达方式也就是你本身的演讲水平如何.这样的演讲你就必须说得四平八稳,偶尔来一两个小幽默,这样效果最好.
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I am going to start with sharing with everyone a few of my observations and bits of information I've read. Have you ever seen ants? Ants are extremely clever animals, they have a very distinct division of labour, which is the main reason why the still manage to carry out their food-stealing missions successfully despite a large number of them.
You may all guess by now what I am going to talk about today, but I'll still have to make it clear. (这是一种幽默) Today, I will be sharing with everyone about one of the most important skills in the 21st century, teamwork, and my main focus will be on "How" one could work in a team.
然后你再继续你的内容演讲,强烈推荐你的conclusion做的有personal view 一点,然后再好玩一点,不过这个是看情况而定,有什么事我可以继续尽量提供帮助!
