语法检查When I was young,I always like to go to a cake shop,this
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When I was young,I would like to go to a cake shop,one different from others and full of magic.

When I first stepped into the shop,I was surprised by all the things there,and I couldn't help looking around.There were beautiful paintings of things like fruits hanging on the wall,fancy tables covered with golden tablecloths,and fancy chairs with little crystals on.The shop was all about gold.Each table all had candles standing on,the candle light made the shop more gorgeously.On the floor lied red carpet,and on the ceiling hung crystal chandelier.In the corner of the shop stood a vase with lovely roses,and in the centre stood a table with all kinds of jams.Well,the most wonderful of all in that shop was the cake.The cake in a glass-frame was in various colours:herry red,peach yellow,lemon green,dark black,magical purple,milky white,and so many colours I couldn't tell.The cake was not only colourful,but also tasty.There were so many flavors for you to choose from.Banana,strawberry,apple,chocolate,vanilly and more.My favorite was watermelon with strawberry inside.It was so delicious.Even more than that,the shape of the cake was cool.Some was star shaped,some flower shaped,some leaf shaped and still others heart shaped.

The owner of that cake shop was so friendly,who was aged but still enjoy her life ver much.She can make so many kinds of tasty cakes.It feels so comfortable to sit on the fancy chair,use the golden dishes,and enjoy the soft music from an old-fashioned CD player.People loved to go there and stay at the cake shop for a long time.Just enjoy the sense of the cake shop.It was magical because everything there was amazing.I still can't stop thinking about the cake shop in my childhood.