1.the paradise,加定冠词
2.a man didn't say不应该said
3.why don't you let me go to paradise,不要再加can't
4.god only said :you can't say "thank you"
5.other's love
6.there isn't water in the land
7.The god only made the man who said 'thank you' GO to the paradise.
make sb do sth “go”要用原型
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