帮忙修改一下假设你是Jeff,请根据下面提供的信息,给你的美国笔友Tom写一封信,要求利用所给信息,字数不少于50词.1
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I'm living Linyi. ——I live in Linyi.描述一个客观现实用一般现在时就行了

In summer,here si hot. And in winter, here is cold.

——It's hot in summer and cold in winter.

About my family.——这句可以不要

My father is a doctor. My mother si a teacher. They all like their works. ——work.

About me?——What about me

I want to be a policeman. Because it's exciting.

Now, it's 6 o'clock. My father is reading a book, my mother si cooking. I'm writing the letter. How about you ?Please write and tell me! Thanks! ——write to me. 写信给某人

写的时候要注意,里边几个is都写成了si,考试不小心会被扣分的