短文改错。 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的
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This autumn, my class went to the seaside to go camping. We arrived at a sandy beach with a well view

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of the sea and mountains. We set up our tents on the sandy beach. When night fell, we started a fire to give

we light and kept us warm. All my classmates sat around them , talking, singing and laughing. Several hours

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l ate , Robert and I went back∧ the tent to have the chat. We stayed up all night. We found that we two had a

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lot of in common. The fire and stars saw our happy and friendship. What I wished time would stop at the

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moment!