我改的是这样的:
I was shorter last year
I'm 5 kg more than last year
Tom is stronger than Tim now
My mother was thiner three years ago
His brother is 170 centimeter this year
I was 38 kgs last year
A lot of animals came to cheer
What happened?
Soon he was first
You're 142 kg weight and 32 cm tall
I liked exercices
I exercices very often so I am strong
Look at these photoes from last year
The children were doing their tests
The children were talking about their tests
我怎么觉得这个短文好怪,不像一篇短文呢?上一句和下一句没有联系,结尾还很奇怪.我只一句一句地改了,因为实在不觉得这是一篇短文.