找出错误,再写正确的句子I'm shorter last yearI’m 5 kg than last yearTom
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我改的是这样的:

I was shorter last year

I'm 5 kg more than last year

Tom is stronger than Tim now

My mother was thiner three years ago

His brother is 170 centimeter this year

I was 38 kgs last year

A lot of animals came to cheer

What happened?

Soon he was first

You're 142 kg weight and 32 cm tall

I liked exercices

I exercices very often so I am strong

Look at these photoes from last year

The children were doing their tests

The children were talking about their tests

我怎么觉得这个短文好怪,不像一篇短文呢?上一句和下一句没有联系,结尾还很奇怪.我只一句一句地改了,因为实在不觉得这是一篇短文.