以下是一篇专门为上海世博会准备的英文介绍,但是里面有不少错误,请改正
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{Shanghai which hold the World Expo in 2010} is an international city.And it is famous for{its}night views and shopping centers.It {also is } one of the largest city{s} in the world.It is known as the 'Shopping Paradise' ,{because } there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers.If you come to shanghai,I recommend you that you can go to the Beach{where} can see the famous Oriental Pearl TV Tower at night .{In} the daytime,you can {go} to People's Square,the Cheng Huang temple and many other {interesting} places.{above all}.Welcome {to Shanghai}.