急,这个文章里有没有错误哈~急,高悬

急,这个文章里有没有错误哈~急,高悬

As far as I know,smoking does damage to people as well as society.First,it will bring much air accident.It makes people lose their house,money,even their lives.At the same time,fire accident also brings some social problenms.Smoking always has a bad effect on smoker's health.People who always smokes will have lung cancer.Not only smokers,but also people near to smokers will get ill.According to the survey,ten thousands of people were died of disease about smoking.Smoking means killing yourself slowly.If you want to live longer,you must give up smoking.In summary,smoking is harmful.Please keep away from cigarette.

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没有!很完美

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