求大神帮忙改一下这篇短文I got up early this morning.It snowed hard last
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按照什么标准修改呢?

几个错误先说一下:went out my house最好改为went out of 或walked out of my house.coversd,应该是笔误吧,covered.Let us改为Let's.We agree改为We agreed.My friends were playing with snow很中式,My friends were playing in the snow或者是My friends were playing outside.都可以接受.Also had some people made their snowman这句话不通顺,要重新写一下.

然后标点符号需要注意一下.中文的句号最好不要出现在英文文章里.