What a happy day today.
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额,还是favourite拼错...

我直接帮你改了.

what a happy day today(用it is我认为更好).

i ate a delicious breakfast in the morning and watched tv in afternoon.(美英一般在and前面不会分段和加标点,54也可以~)

after watching tv,i did my homework with my favourite friend.

then i played basketball with my friends.

in the evening i take a walk with my father and mother.

i had a happy day!

恩,7年级的文章最好多用点形态,例如:过去将来,过去的过去,过去完成时等等等等~

还有,不要用这么多段落,

这片比以前的好,

但是最好抓住中心~