幫我改一下我的英文文章要求是6分鐘的自我介紹（英文和中文各一遍）和才藝表演,我的才藝表演大概可以占1分鐘左右,所以想麻煩
1个回答

My name is...,my English name is Solomon.Don't you think my English name is very interesting {改成了你不认为我的英语名字很有趣么?,反问语气既加强了与评委观众的互动形式,也丰富了整篇文章的语言.} And I'm 13 years old.My Hobbies are very wide and rich ,such as playing computer ,reading books and swimming.{我的兴趣非常的广泛和丰富,例如有打电脑.}I also like drawing,and I wish to be a cartoonist in the future{我也很喜欢绘画涂鸦,我希望在将来能成为一个漫画家.}.As Chinese saying,"more haste,less speed,the passage of time is just like the flow of water ,which goes on day and night."So I'll make good use of every day and every second,and try my best to make my dream come true step by step!Nothing is possible,so I believe in myself ,I believe the tomorrow will be nicer.{没有什么是不可能的,所以我信仰自己,我相信明天会更好.} I'm very happy to introduce myself to you.I hope that I can intersect to the good friends frmo you .Best wishes to you.Thanks 除了显著的添加了外,有些小细节也改了下.放假就没咋碰英语,所以文章没怎的很好,看下可以不.

相关问题