求英语作文改错请帮忙看看英语作文有没有什么错误,随便在改几个高大上的句型,No purpose no spiritLif
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No purpose,no spirit(Without goal,without spirit)

Living a life without a life goal is just like an arrow without its destination--You can only aim and shoot the goal when you know what your goal is; it's like a voyage without lighthouses,you can only finish the sail when you know where your destination is.A life goal was a compass for life--I would not go on the right track without it.

We have been asked to do things or not during we growing by our parents and teachers.However,have you ever been thinking of why should you set a life goal?An analogy may help you understand what I mean:some day ,you caught a sight of a pair of shoes in the shopwindow.Although they were really tiny for you,it was so cute and charming that you cannot deny to buy it.The uncomfortable feelings almost killed you during the next few days when you were wearing it,but you smiled anyway for everybody else's compliments.

Accidentally,you found a pair of old and dirty sneakers suits you the best.Everyone makes mistakes,all of us have failed before on the way to our goal.In this case,the most right thing to do is to be brave and face the failures,to see it as a challenge--make it meaningful and unforgetable.You cannot depend on any one but yourself.Only courage can help you achieve the goal.Only courage help you find the direction.

In conclusion,the goal is the soul of one person.Without goal,without spirit.