这是我儿子的一则日记,有语法和时态错误的指出来.还没打完
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she was silent,and she had a smile on her face.the girl on her right said:"we DON'T like the windows open.DO you have ANY idea?IF we WANT you close THE windows,you must close them.you HAVE a TALKATIVE mouse.WHY DO YOU TALK so much?JUST SHUT UP.i DON'T WANT TO HEAR you say ANYTHING ." i thought she WAS A SORT OF bad student,SO i KEPT silent,i didn't like speaking to her.A moment LATER ,i wanted to drink.some water fell off to the ground WHILE I WAS DRINKING.the girl said:"my foot IS WET WITH THE water." then she threw a bottle to ME,