总体来说还行..但有几处需要注意..
一 拼写.different not diffirent..
二 搭配 to relax themselved..我们可以用"make them relaxed"..
Everyone in my class has their own ideas..加上own好些..另外looking forwad to go to 中go 改为going..(look forward to doing sth.)
以及all kinds of...
三 句法 Some want to stay at home to relax themselved,others plan to visit their friends and relatives.此句中在others前要加连词如and while(while 好些) ..