我准备演讲一篇英语稿子,但不知语法对错,请帮忙修改,注：grandma=gm mobile phone=mp
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按顺序来给你指出吧
1.so i just want应该是wanted.
2.play a game in my gm's mobile phone这个有些歧议,应该表达的更清楚一些play a game installed in my gm's mobile phone.
3.closing friden少了一个d
4.I have forgot 应该改为I forget it
5.i have to say goodbye应该是i had to say goodbye
6.and we've left应该是then we left.后面的and have already got home.去掉
7.any words应该是any word
8.my father told me why he.应该是my father told me why he had been .
9.so if there were.应该是so if anything happend that .
10.it could be a big mistske拼写错误mistake
11.error应该用mistake更合适
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