Write an article called “Do you have a cold?”
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Do you have a cold

Everybody sometimes has a cold.When you a cold ,you should(have a) rest.You shouldn't go out at night.You should go to bad early for a few nights and you should see a doctor.You shouldn't eat junk food like ice cream.You should drink lots of water.

If you has(has 应改为want to have,第二人称用复数) a healthy lifestyle,you should try(to) do(more) exercise(应该加负数,变成exercises),and you should eat a balance(把balance改成balanced) of yin and yang to be healthy.

作文写的还不错,主要注意单复数的应用,就可以了.