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My plan for the National Day holiday

The 1st of October is a very important day to Chinese.This is the 60th birthday of our motherland.We will also have eight days to have a rest.What follewed is my plan.

The first day,I'll watch the national review troops on TV with my family in the morning.Then I'll go shopping for sharing happniess.

The secend day,I'll go to my hometown to visit my parents .Then I'll study from 9:00 to 11:30,because "Rome is not bulit in one day".So I must study hard.In the afernoon I'll meet my friends and classmates and sing with them ,and then maybe I'll go to yun tai mountian for journey.

How agreeable days!