高中英语改错题 急When i was in high school,most of my friend had bic
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When i was in high school,most of my (friends) had bicyles.I hoped i (can) have it (also).One day,i saw (a) second-hand bicyle,(it)was only one hundred yuan.I asked my father(for)the money.But he said he (can) only give me half of the money.He (thought i)should (get) the other (money by) myself .So i went to sell newspapers after (不要the!)school.My father was pleased (when) i showed him the money a month (later).He (gave) me the other fifty (yuan).You can imagine how (不要much!) happy i was when i rode to school (by) my own bicycle.