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Dear Mary,
I'm (an改成a) Senior 3 student,I'm going to take part in this summer's college entrance examination,In preparation for it,I am studying very hard.As a result,I often feel (exhausting改成exhausted) both physically and mentally,(Therefore改成However),my parents still put a lot of pressure (加入which/that) is too heavy for me (去掉not) to cope with,I attempted to (communicating改成communicate) with them,but failed.
Now I'm quite upset about it,How can my parents understand (us改成me)?I really don't know (how改成what) to do,Could you please give me some (advices改成advice)?
(Looking改成Look) forward to your reply.
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