One possible version:
It is reported that the famous American pop music star Michael Jackson died in June, 2009 and I was
surprised to hear that twelve of his fans killed themselves over the death of their idol. I think it is a wrong
and stupid idea for those crazy fans to end theirs lives.
Music is so powerful that it can create another world for people to stay away from the trouble of the
real world. But as middle school students, we should not confuse our love for music with that for the
musicians and do whatever they do. In that case, we will lose ourselves and sometimes even destroy our
own life.