1.Currently,with raising business and international culture connection,people’s views vary from one to another concerning‘’ the problem’s effect.‘’
2.One reason why I am in favor of ‘’the view‘’
3.can help us to learn more‘’ national faith‘’打引号的部分有问题.头两个指示不明确,第三个意义不明确
优点:structure,coherence,vocab都不错.6.5--7.5分的水平