楼上有语法错误,standing与其逻辑主语the warm wind有矛盾,stand应该是人站立,而the warm wind不能站立吧?我的翻译是:
When one is standing on the beach,he will feel deeply refreshed in front of the infinite ocean and its vernal breeze touching his cheeks.
觉得stand总有一丝欠缺的感觉.想用stay或者pause(驻足).