I also like to reading and writing.-like to do,这边后面要动词原型.
he could be my favorite singer-为什么用could 如果他是你最喜欢的歌手,就是 is,could感觉虚拟了.
“They both give me a lot of fun and build my unique personality as well as my goal and dream.
”-这句比较中式思维,你把主语换了.可以说,你从这2者中学到了等等
“Personally,I've been considering I have a really complicated personality because sometimes don't really like to study,sometimes..”-这个也很中式思维.然后后半句,somtimes后面少主语.
最后一句也很中式英语.
基本语法,词汇什么的都没问题.就是,如果以后写英语的时候能尽量不要用中文的思维来翻译.别人能理解的文章,但是会感觉不是很地道的英语.