I prefer the season like Spring.
for one thing,spring have(改为has) a balmy climate that it's appropriate for activities in the open air.表达方式最好改为With a balmy climate,Spring is appropriate for activities in the open air.
Everything's gone(改为Everything turns) green and make(改为makes) us full of vigor.
For another,i’m afraid of cold weather.It’s a painful thing for me (加上to go)outside when the wind is blowing hard.
Besides,there is no need (加上for)air-conditioner and hearter in the spring so that (加上it)save(改为saves) energy(改为electricity或者power) and (加上causes)less air pollution.