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He always being alone ---is being或把being---is

keep touch with ---keep in touch with

is avoiding the duty and keeps ---is to avoid.and keep

His life's goal is has ---is that he wants to have.and be.

第二段怎么过去时,现在时混用啊,很多地方都混了

use Internet to firing ---to fire

makes Ryan unhappy and he thought你到底用现在时还是过去时?

Ryan talk 用现在时加S,过去时talked

let Ryan appears a necessary job?想表达什么意思?let sb do sth