英语!知识!the National DayToday is Oct.first——the National Day.I
6个回答

1,应写成Oct.the first或者Oct.1st,

2,最好说It is an important day in china.

3,如果你想表示我们放一整天假的意思建议改成We have the holiday for a whole day.

4In the afternoon,I played the computer games,,改成.

5.应改成How interesting they are!

6,In the evening,I did some homework and ate some nice fruit.

7,I hope that i can have a good dream.

8,Today i am exited,and i have a good time.

最后汗一把