各位英文达人,帮忙看看作业的语法错误和用法不当,非常谢谢
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Sports convey different messages to (the) public; (“never give up”) is one of (the) important and positive message(s) which sports try to send to fans all the time.(A) player will be abandoned by the fans immediately (if) he or she gives up before (the game comes to an) end.Victory and defeat are always decided at the last moment in many sports; in fact,this moment (is)usually the most exciting part (of the game).For example,in one NBA (match in) 2009,Josh Smith’s final dunk helped Atlanta Hawks (win) the Houston Rockets at the last moment.After Josh Smith got the point,only 0.7 second (remained); Rockets still tried to (fight back),even though less than one second (was left).Players have a feeling that hopes always come with them,so they always battle to the last moment no matter whether they can win the game.And this exists in American movies and cartoons too.For instance,in the Space Jam,Michael Jordan (led) his cartoon dream team to play against the Monster team.Cartoon team won the game by Michael’s final dunk at the very last second.It (may appear) impossible,but that is the spirit which sports want to convey to (the) public.

写得不错,括号内是已修改的地方